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A Collection of Musings: Dusk

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Sophia Koon

 

 

A Breath of Fresh Air

Dusk settles into my vision like specks of dust on a windowsill

The wind whistles at the door,

Screeching and halting

Demanding to be let in

The candle I lit an hour ago

Bathes my face

in its warm buttery glow

 

I seek to be soothed

In this cold weather

And yet

I feel my soul awakening

As the air gets crisper

And the leaves underfoot

Crunchier

 

The clock on the mantle

Ticks threateningly

Can time slow down?

 

The surrounding dusk outside calls my name

I set down my pen

And I venture out into the cold

Where I know my thoughts

That hang like shriveled dead leaves

From the branches

Sway in the wind,

Waiting to be picked

To be plucked

To be chosen

Once again

 

Shadow of a Memory

I return to the forest

Where I first laid my thoughts to rest

They stir up like the leaves

I pad through underfoot

I catch glimpses of you

Through the trees

Watching as the wind picked up traces of your scent

Amaretto

Crisp autumn

I see the parchment brown of your hair

Among the brambles

And the soft checkered pattern of your coat

How wrong it is

That like the changing of the seasons

You faded away too

 

Our love turns rapidly into dusk

Cold, fleeting

Like a silken scarf

Wrapped tightly around my neck

Comforting and warm

I feel it tighten around my throat

 

Times of Old

I walk the trail

Of the forest draped in its autumn garments

Of Ruby crimson aubergine maple

I tread softly through the crunchy leaves

Fall is proof

That change can be beautiful

I remember dancing through the trees

In this same spot

Many a dark autumn night ago

The pale moon shining blissfully down upon us

And I wondered

In times of old

If they did this too


Autumn Haiku

This old winding path

Stained red by the autumn leaves

Past bleeds into now

 

Autumn’s Muse

The sunny facade of Summer

Fades

Into her pale complexion

Her sister Autumn

With her auburn curls

And fiery attitude 

Her biting words

The harsh wind

That seeps down into your bones

And stays a while

Her blood red nails

Adorn the forest floor

The cold dark earth

Reminiscent of her presence

I am reminded

As daylight turns into dusk

Of the ever present change

That lurks in every corner of the world

Shadows that float about the forest floor

I am turning into an autumnal creature myself

 

Masquerade of Memory

Come visit me

In the garden of dusk

The roses are lovely tonight, aren’t they?

The brambles grow tall

Like a wall around the garden

Let's put on a masquerade show, shall we?

I'll put on my best dress and

my crimson mask

A swan’s delicate features

Dripping in glittering gems

And you put on yours;

A fox, crafty

Wiley

Dark eyes concealed

Waiting patiently in hiding

You’ll take my hand

Me in my midnight black dress

Dusk approaches

We bow

We’ll dance together in the shadows

You kiss my gloved hand

Our pace quickens

A dance of death

Our steps rapid

Our breaths short

As we try to keep up with one another

I stumble,

You catch me

Your mask slips

I grab ahold of it

It cracks like porcelain

We stand there, gasping for breath in the cool air

The wind stinging our backs

I hold what’s left of your facade

And you reach out violently,

Ripping my mask off my face

We stand there, wretched,

As the light fades

You've seen my every flaw, ripped and lain bare

There’s nothing but shadows surrounding us

Nothing left to reconcile

We sink to the floor

Surrounded by night

The brambles surrounding us

Grow thorny

As the night becomes weary

There is nothing left

For us to piece back together

 
 
 

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